I rewrote chapter II

@NGChloe Chloe
Thu, 17 Apr 2025 00:04:02 +0000

@NGChloe wrote:

I was going through my old chapters and editing them to add dates and such.
I then rewrote the second chapter, massively.
I always kind of took issue with chapter 2 and how it turned out, but I settled for leaving it as is.
But since I'm taking time off and I'm insane, I rewrote the whole thing, changing the beginning, ending, and a good deal of the middle.
There's still a lot of missed potential, but at least that pain sits with the ending of said chapter.

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