I Will Review Your Comic If You Review Mine

[DiscountedArtist]

Here's Mine:
https://tapas.io/series/Discounted-Comics
I might not get to you depending on how many people review mine.

[NUG-Boster]

your comic is realy good you just need to pick a style and stick with it
https://tapas.io/series/The-Random-Adventures-Of-The-Fast-Food-Ga

[DiscountedArtist]

A fast-food based comic is really cool! It looks like you're not drawing digitally, which makes things messier. You should use a ruler or something when drawing the panels, because I think that would look neater. Also, I think you're drawing with crayons or colored pencils, so don't focus as much on pressing hard, and focus more on filling up all the white spaces. Or maybe you're using markers, which in that case I don't know too much about. Also, for drawing circles you can watch this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zR3wbEudD1I . At least, that's what I think, and I'm not too much of an experienced artist myself.

[dsptss78]

Your comic is pretty funny especially the specific ocean joke. I think my favorite joke would be the speeding ticket one. The only thing I'll suggest is to add more new characters for variation. That way it won't be mostly the two same characters telling jokes. Overall I think your webcomic exhibit clever word plays and puns. I have already subscribed and I'm looking forward to your series.

here's mine, feel free to tell me what I need to improve on.

Dan | Tapas

[drcharlotterodricks]

This gem right here is so funny.I really like your art style .This is mine

https://tapas.io/series/You--Me

[DiscountedArtist]

Your idea is very intriguing. Someone who gets superpowers and was bullied in the past. Almost like a Peter Parker without Uncle Ben. Very cool.
DISCLAIMER: I don't write these kinds of comics, but I will do my best with reviewing
First, I don't know much about the characters. You could start off with a monologue of the character's day, showing his emotion and the actions of his classmates. You can also have the powers come randomly, for example, he accidentally breaks a plate while eating.
Second, have more clear lines. The lines are quite rough, and I had to look at them for a while to understand what was going on.
Third, you should show what drives the character insane. For example, everyone laughs and insults him in class, and afterward, people are trying to beat him up, but then he accidentally uses his powers and kills one of the bullies. I don't think anyone would go off on a killing spree the moment they got powers.

That's it. I didn't rate the last comic I reviewed because I didn't think of it until now. I rate your comic 6.5/10. I would give it higher if I was interested in these types of comics. Maybe a 7.5/10.

I really like your comic, and I will most likely subscribe to you in the future

[jensrichard77]

What a funny little comic you have there.
The art is just as it should be for this type and I love the Blue character. He really tries hard.

The downside of this is coming up with that many jokes can be hard and not everyone will get them all. But then there is something for everyone.

Keep up the good work and just let the Red one kick the Blue when he gets too dumb.

Here is mine

Blue Life | Tapas

[edicoesgorilase]

Hey there,

Loved the punchlines. Really funny.

I think you need to work more on the lettering and balloons, so they seem more natural.

I really hope that helps.

Thank you,

[EdwardSaddle]

Dude your humour is... i don't know! different than mine, so i really like it. You write the kind of jokes that appear
non-sense (is a compliment), but are smart, not immediate. As for the drawing style, it's very simple, and recognizable, keep it that way, it serves your purpose. Good Luck

Here's my comic, it's called "Cancer on Spoon":
https://tapas.io/series/canceronspoon

[DiscountedArtist]

I saw some of your other stuff on this forum, and you said that you do this for fun (which is good). I didn't get why you were labeling you and me, until I realized that's the series name.
First, your lines are quite squiggly and your comics would look much clearer if you used precise lines. You can use a ruler to draw the straight lines, and use this video to draw circles: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zR3wbEudD1I .
Second, you should spend a little extra time writing your dialogue, because the handwriting is a little messy.

I won't rate this, because you're goal is to have fun, and you're doing an amazing job of that so far

[DiscountedArtist]

I like the lamp comic because I didn't expect it to do that. You're comic description says that it's about this blue character trying to fit in. And the comic is doing that. Also, you have good fourth wall breaks So here are some things that I would do.
First, give him a mouth more often. Also, give him eyebrows. Eyebrows are very important, because they let your reader know your character's feelings. A mouth also does that, but not much for being confused, angry, and maybe some more.

Actually, that was it, I couldn't think of anything more. I would rate your comic 7.5/10

[jensrichard77]

Wow thank you for looking at my comic. And thank you for the feedback.
I do know about eyebrows, but the comic has run too long to change that, It is a icon thing now. But I will think about it.
But I will remember to use more mouth when needed.

Can I ask how far did you go with the story?

Edit:
You do know that your characters don't have eyebrows right?

[DiscountedArtist]

Your art is very good. The lines are neat, the backgrounds look nice, the shadows look nice, and your characters look good. Your story is also very good. We get to know about the main character, and there's a new character that brings in the problems for the main character. How is he going to go out with her? We don't know yet, but we do know that he's trying. Also, I like how you inform the reader on the side characters. I don't have anything to say for you to work on.

10/10

[CommanderMarty]

I'm not that much of a fan of the style of humor here.

The art is basically stick men.

overall it's a 6/10

Uber Upgrades | Tapas

the art in the first bit is very rough but it gets better as the series goes on.

[DiscountedArtist]

I read your first ten, and then some of your latest comics. I was going to tell you to use more dialogue, but then I realized that you already started doing that. Also, I like how you introduced a new character.

[jensrichard77]

The art is basically stick men.

YES!!!!!!
YES IT IS

And we are proud

[CommanderMarty]

there wasn't much else to say about it.

[jensrichard77]

You do know that your characters don't have eyebrows right?

I just crawl to a dark corner

[DiscountedArtist]

The idea reminds me of "My Hero Academia." I'm don't know much about these kinds of comics, but I will do my best in reviewing.
First, your lines are squiggly. To get ride of squiggly lines, just turn up you're stabilizer all the way up. It will make your lines so much smoother.
Second, I don't know too much about your character. You can start off with a monologue or dialogue, just to let the reader know why he wants to become the best upgraded fighter.

That's it. I would rate your comic 6.5/10. Turning up your stabilizer to make your lines smoother would make me give you a 7.5/10

[CommanderMarty]

I will put on the record that Uber Upgrades is my take on a shounen series.