I'd like to ask for a beta reader to help me out

@Pocketman
Sun, 12 Mar 2023 13:59:36 +0000

@Pocketman wrote:

It's the first chapter of my novel I'm working on and I'd like some constructive feedback on it.
I'm a relatively new writer so I'll be in need of any advice I can get.

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QAT Chapter 1

CHAPTER 1 Attack on Thixoseon It is a cold and windy night. Snow falls from the sky as snowflakes dance in the wind. Even in the beauty of winter, there are those who wish to shed blood. “Y-your majesty! We’re under attack!!”, the king’s manservant exclaims as he bursts into the throne room,...

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