My God, you draw this really excellent and quite accurate to my imagination (which is not to be expected since my dogshit writing skill). No, I like the touch you give at the end, it is giving a feeling of tension and anticipation.
Are you also the person behind "Post a serious comic page and I'll make it funny?" Not sure because I'm forgetful but I feel like recognizing your style.
Again, thank you very much and mind if I share it?