Thank you for the opportunity! 
Your drawing made me think of my character, Ray! He's a 16-year old student who has a tumultuous family dynamics. He has social anxiety and can't fit in at school. He's shy and quiet, but can throw intense tempers when he's angry (which is quite often). I would love to see him having a more intense, angry expression! (If I were to choose an accent color, it would be ice-cold blue!)