I took a quick peak by looking at the first two episodes. It really not my thing. Your art work hurts my eyes with the scribbled in color work. I think it would actually be better without the color. I also don't like the color text, especially the yellow text. I have a hard time seeing certain colors, and yellow is one of them. The color just blends right into white background for me.
Okay, so I actually ended up continuing to read because I wanted to see if it made any improvements. It did in some ways. I like that the color wasn't just scribbled onto the characters starting with the third episode, but you still use color text.
I'm not trying to be rude or mean, but the stories seem a bit too simplistic and boring. However, I tend to read novels and comics that have a lot of action, so I don't think this is a problem for your story but rather a me problem.
If you stop with the colored text later in this comic, let me know. I may be willing to finish it. It just hurts my head to read the yellow text.