I'll read and comment on your works ( for real, not just for numbers) How can we help each other better?

BoomerZ 2025-07-21 04:05:42 UTC #21

Will always take reviews.

AliceTuinz 2025-07-21 07:09:15 UTC #22

So many replies! Thank you everyone for joining us on this - I'm happy to check all of your works, but it will take me a bit as I actually want to read through every one of them and give you all the comments you deserve, actual comments from a reader not just a quick line dropped.

Just want to say you're all amazing for putting so much energy in your works <3

Thatslife 2025-07-21 15:51:48 UTC #23

Please do.

AliceTuinz 2025-07-21 19:24:32 UTC #24

You have such an awesome intro ( I read that you decided to add one after you published and I'm glad you did, it's spot on). Your writing is really great, you do so well with action scenes and your world building is subtle but strong, you give the perfect eerie feeling of parallel world, uncanny valley style - not Sun but Sol, etc.

Really like it, keep it up, I'll be reading more for sure!

diamantecreate 2025-07-21 19:50:55 UTC #25

Hello

congrats on 3 weeks with your project!
Here is my webcomic WolfTrain to Heaven. I started it as a form of art therapy a year ago, and as a contest submission. It didn't win but I was happy to have a story to share.
I hope you like it!

DiamanteCreate

AliceTuinz 2025-07-22 18:24:00 UTC #26

Love your world origins and the vivid way in which you build Goliath ( great name choice) with the slums and the metal dome.

Ps1on 2025-07-22 19:35:46 UTC #27

Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could read my work so far and critique it. I think I may want to rewrite the first chapter though because I don't think that it matches the level of my other ones. Thank you!

Dadoche 2025-07-22 20:49:47 UTC #28

Thank you so much! This means a lot!

Aero 2025-07-22 21:32:34 UTC #29

I wanna get in on this too! But, uh, I have a lot of ongoing projects, so you can just pick one from this list

Premise: Demon vs. Humans, but also versus Aliens? Lol

Premise: Fairies and Dragons vs. Demons and an evil God

Premise: A fluffy dog and a young witch in training!

Premise: Detective murder mysteries

nathhhhhh 2025-07-22 22:31:10 UTC #30

hey, if you do get a chance, please check out my series, releasing daily, feedback would be a great help in the early stages, thanks

AliceTuinz 2025-07-23 08:54:38 UTC #31

I remember reading your first chapter and loving it. ( I re-read it now, so my comment can be fresh). Your characters jump right off the page and Keisha is immediately likeable. The parallel between her enthusiasm for Comic Con and the fantasy series and being thrown straight into one is a great narrative device.

AliceTuinz 2025-07-25 18:58:57 UTC #32

It was such a cozy, feel good but somewhat melancholic read. I really enjoyed your style.

miyaskya 2025-07-26 07:26:54 UTC #33

Hi! Here's my fantasy story. Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you!

Liv45 2025-07-26 12:38:53 UTC #34

Thank you so much for your time and the comments! This means a lot! <3

mohammed_kirito 2025-07-26 12:41:04 UTC #35

This isn’t your average underdog story.
It’s darker. It’s messier. It’s real.
Still think you’re ready?

trtellsfantasy 2025-07-26 15:33:50 UTC #36

If anyone is interested in a fantasy novel with action, magic, magical-girl inspired, found family, diverse characters, strong leads, and adventure that updates daily check out:

Brief summary: Keisha Alighieri thought she was just a normal teenager and that her biggest problems in life were what outfit to wear to school. But when an evil society kidnaps her mother, secrets get revealed that will change Keisha’s life forever when she discovers that magic resides in her veins.

susutaru 2025-07-26 23:49:55 UTC #37

I am no really fan for sub for sub because i want to gain real readers that love to read, what i'm drawing, who enjoy the story.

I surely supp other artists, for novels I unfurtunately totally lack of time. (i just can supp and give many hearties if preffered)

If you like vampires, drama and romance, this manga could be fitting for you? tomorrow starts the new episode ^^
(Japanese reading direction)

The_Chosen_Z 2025-07-26 23:53:55 UTC #38

It looks really cool. There's an English version on my tapas profile if that's better.