Thank you so much for the review! I agree with the lettering not being the best, as I usually just type things in without adjusting anything. This is a bad habit of mine I need to fix, since I want the story to be as fluid and as readable as possible.
I also agree on the anatomy part. As much as I think I improved, I still find it to be kinda off and a bit wonky at times, so I'll make sure to thoroughly read your previous advice. Character hair is another problem of mine. I still need to practice it a bit and I'm not a huge fan of how I used to draw it, because it looked like some sort of hat instead of actual hair.
Thank you again for your feedback and thanks for subbing! Hope you'll enjoy the story 
