@Van - MikoMooMaa
Thoughts while reading:
Warning labels are starting to annoy me. Removed all of mine two days ago, I dislike this feeling of overprotectiveness. Back in the day you watched a cartoon because it was cute, but instead you got āHappy Tree Friendsā.
Someone left the ānoclipā console command on.
Tail leg? Ah sheās Casper. But white/monochrome with a head and a tail? I mean, Iām thinking it, youāre thinking it.
Oh I get visual representation.
Step-bro energy?
She got knocked out off-screen? Did I miss something? Wat? Oh! She really did get drop kicked offscreen That was a jarring transition.
HAHAHA you legit ended with the Skyrim meme!
Overall thoughts:
It starts as a cutesy mix between Adventure Time and Nightmare before Christmas. And slapstick. But when I skip to the latest chapter it gets all teen/young adult domestic drama? I either missed it or thereās no blend into it. Like hints in the beginning that itās going in that direction. Except for the synopsis. Theā¦.creator stuff appears very abrupt and the sudden character POV change is jarring. No time is given for you to get to know more about the main cast before switching to something completely different in chapter 4.
āI donāt know anything about what I am or you people! Up until now I used to ghost through walls but now Iām in a place where I canāt do that and Iām also probably kidnapped!ā and the reply is, āāAight let me tell you about something else and creationism.ā
The scene transitions with āmeanwhileā and ālaterā sometimes do more damage than help direct my attention. Maybe the narrator voice could direct a scene transition instead.
I think youāre moving too fast through your own story.
@JeanGuillet - Chateau Grief
Thoughts while reading:
This seems like a series with some thought and effort behind it. Also ALL THE TAGS!
A lot of content. Iāll start with the beginning and skim through. Iām not expecting to understand the later episodes.
Beginning with a quote from a dead man is overplayed.
Crap this is a series formatted with mobile in mind. Itās going to be such a pain to read.(update, it got better)
Gun doesnāt go click every time you touch it. That only happens in hentai.
A bit weird, Dialogue and portrayal is good then at points it becomes very bad? Like itās written by another person.
Disney shark, dafuq?
Overall thoughts:
A long series that starts with the antagonist as the protagonist but then seems to switch focus later on. I got a lot of āgod gameā vibes where a character is a master of his domain and just plays with everyone like a Dungeon Master.
Dialogue sometimes feels off, like itās written by another person and thatās where some cliches appear. Sometimes the 3D models are too striking because of their textures and your attention is drawn to it. Itās difficult to tell when someone is reading a mind, talking telepathically, projecting etc. I had to do double takes to realize what was going on.
Theyāre called telepaths but judging by the powers on display weāre dealing with high class wizards with maxed out professions. Nitpicky for some, big deal for me because many times thereās not a lot of thought on the ripple effect said powers have on the world.