Jam Comic Part 2 (for writers & artists)

[EncryptedWriting]

Not going to be nit picky but I think things are better without a script. That's the fun of it, seeing what everyone comes up with.

[WistyWrites]

Ahh this is a masterpiece! Tbh I didn’t think anyone would do the script I made.

[SurvivALIST]

If you people don't mind sad and unexpected stories, here's the script:

THE LAST THREE PATS

Written by SurvivALIST
Thankfully drawn by _________

[Imagine this scene: A cat looking up at the person in the bed.]

Panel 1: (Closeup on the impatient cat's face as if looking up and demanding something) Meeoww!

Panel 2: (An old withered right hand with a defined long-sleeve of a woman's nightgown is placed on the cat's head)

Panel 3: (The frail hand falls off the cat's head. The cat looks surprised.)

Panel 4: (The cat huffs and puffs in indignation then meows irritably) Meeoww!!

Panel 5: (Frail right hand returns once again on the cat's head)

Panel 6: (The hand falls off once again)

Panel 7: (This time, the cat is more demanding and meows loudly or wildly) Meeoww!!!

Panel 8: (Closeup on the frail hand moving to the left of the panel)

Panel 9: (The hand is on the cat's head and patting the head's fur. The cat looks proud of being patted.)

Panel 10: (The hand falls off and becomes lifeless)

Panel 11: (Cat becomes angry because the pats weren't continuous)

Panel 12: (Full shot of cat's back figure. Cat shakes the frail hand hanging from the bed w/ its two paws.)

Panel 13: (Cat stops shaking the hand)

Panel 14: (Cat slaps the hand with its right paw)

Panel 15: (Cat looks up to the bed) Meow?

Panel 16: (Cat jumps onto the tall bed)

Panel 17: (The bedsheets are ruffled by the cat because it was trying to wake up the old lady. The lifeless hand is also disturbed) Meeoww!!!

Panel 18: (CU on the lifeless arm that being disturbed and add speech balloon) Meeoww!!!

Panel 19: (Extreme CU on the lifeless arm still being disturbed)

Panel 20: (Black background with the title) THE LAST THREE PATS

[SurvivALIST]

to give an opportunity to try out to workwriters if their scripts work

I do need this. Please comment to tell me if my script worked or was not understandable. I'm that wordy.

If the problem is not the script, maybe it's the title. I guess? TY

[Puck]

WOOOW!
Why are you so good?
Seriously this is great in every way and you have been so fast

[Puck]

We can have some jams, the other one is panel by panel.
I do the 24 hours comic day once a year, that´s a fun challenge too

[Puck]

I think it´s a great script and I personally like good desprictions in a script

[SurvivALIST]

Thanks but I'm still an amateur. Still thanks.

[Legendofgenii]

Thank you for this thread. This was such good practice for me.

I am the slowest person in the world, so to draw this in one evening was a huge challenge - and (fuelled by tea) I did it!

The cats were great fun to draw.

Spectre is a bit creepy, but he is a Bond villain I guess.

[DanielRKM]

And DANG did you rock it!

[Puck]

slow? I would need a week and it wouldn´t look like it

[Parademero]

Tried coloring 🤣, while taking class couldn't finish seems like I need longer class hours

[Legendofgenii]

Awe this looks great! I like how you’ve rearranged the panels too.

[Parademero]

It's all thanks to select drag

[Parademero]

Here is a try hope you like it, (written: PARADEMERO)
1) person A ‘’think about it again, it’s not a bad deal.’’
2) person A ‘’you get the half, I get the half, we can avoid unnecessary bloodshed.’’
3) person A and B sitting is silence 'woosh'
4) person B ‘’hard pass.’’
5) person A ‘’little boy, you know nothing about business, you will lose everything working like that.’’
6) person B, ‘’I will take my chances.’’
7) Person A, ‘’then write it down and let’s be done with it.’’
8) Person B gulps
9) person B picks up a pen.
10) person B adds a X on tic-tac toe and joins a line,
‘11) person B takes a candy from the table, "it's all mine now"
"12) person A fall on the ground, "this world is truly a cruel place to live.’’

[DanielRKM]

I’m so on this… it will not be as fast as @Legendofgenii, though.

[Puck]

I´m happy that you guys participate

[Ignis]

[Parademero]

Awe, looks awesome , didn't thought someone would draw it 🤧

[system]

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