Chapter 5 of The Blank Scroll just wrapped up today.
I'd really love it if some of you could read through it and let me know what you think.
This chapter I worked hard to have the characters assert their individuality a bit more, leading to some some interpersonal conflict. I'd be very interested in how effective you think it is and what you'd suggest to continue growing.
Chapter 5 starts here: https://tapas.io/episode/1460934
There are some carry over elements from previous chapters but I think this one works on it's own pretty well.