A little hard to read... I would go back and fix a couple of things but overall, the story the is interesting. I always was fond of story of the sacred tree, Holy tree, Yggdrasil lore, etc. Anything to do with the Tree of Life is always going to get my attention hands down. As for Jasper, sound interesting to me... He was born and already being treated like dirt right from the start just because a half-breed. I know his being treated like garbage, but I like it, lol. it has Inuyasha background vibes to it... where half-breeds are treated like filth which is an element story plot that is in my webcomic Infinite Strike so instant sub from. Keep up the good work. I just hope in time, Jasper grows a backbone and stands up to his messed-up family because geez