The name's Psychobott, and I'm here to help other creators with their piece and give a constructive criticism. Just be noted that my opinion might or might not help you at all. You may as well request one another for a review trade in this thread.
So first of the rule, I am a student in my final senior highschool year, so I will only be reviewing a single chapter of your work due to limited time. If your first episode is short, then exceptions are in the table, I will be reading more episodes until I deem it enough.
Second of all, no one wants sugar-coated crap, cause what's the use of reviewing your work if I'm only spouting bs.
Third, I won't be able to review every submitted work or review stuffs on a daily basis. Just wish my mood is up everytime.
And fourth of all, payment is compulsory... I'm not talking about money. Well, if you insist, I accept such offered kindness, lol. There are four kinds of payment you could choose from and do for me:
1. Subscribe to my story, Julian
2. Like Julian's chapters
3. Both, lol
4. Review on Julian's second chapter (first one is just me writing out unnecessary horny crap, lol)
Here's Julian's link:
I will be rating your cover as well as the summary. After all, the summary is the first hook to subscribers. If I ended up liking ypur work, then baby it's going in my library.
To submit your work, send the story's link on this thread. Submit the following form as well.
Public/Private Review: (I'm creating a review spot in my profile, would you like your review to be uploaded there or be sent via pm?)
Do you want me to focus on anything particular (optional):
If I ever said something mean or insulting about your work, just remember that it doesn't mean your creation is trash. It doesn't justify that you should stop doing whatever you are currently doing. Maybe a change of pace, yes. I did this, I reviewed your work, and gave my criticism so that you'll know the spots that need a change in tracks, need to be sharpened and be given attention, because boi, we creators are all here for one thing: readers.