Hello, I've read your comic! However, please check out other's people work, too - mine or somebody else's!
I think your art style is very interesting - it's really unique and recognizable I think, which is a very good sign - you always want your comic to stand out from the rest. Your hand writing is also very pretty, I like all the curls, it fits well with the atmosphere. Your drawing of hands are quite refined, they seriously look very nice and precise. Great job! I would advise to study the structure of human faces a little bit, they can get a tiny bit wonky in your drawings. Also, I wasn't able to tell whether the white lines in their hair was actually grey hair (they are growing old) or streaks of light. All in all, it's pleasant to look at and captures the spirit of the song well - it's really good for your first comic!