@TreeHugger
I hope this won't bring me to a story of Romeo & Juliet. If it does, I do see your originality, too. Within the first chapter, you tried to tell us about the struggle and political issues within the royal family.
It was a sub from me, I can't say I immensely like it, but it does have a slice of your imaginary world which would pique my interest in how this will bring me to.
On another note, I kind of flow myself with the simplicity of word usage brought forth by your sentences. It was hard for me, but I see you have no struggle writing it. Just another little thing that you might need to pay attention. The dialogue stated who said those words in each after you ended the conversation. I know it between two people's conversation, but sometimes we will get confused without knowing who's is talking. I learned from other authors, and I've been fixing my mistakes since then. Keep up your excellent work.