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conventurecomics 2022-04-09 05:50:17 UTC #43

On tapas just reached 1.6k views 22 subs

On webtoons
Reached 2,163 views gained 39 subs

SoulSean 2022-04-09 05:55:15 UTC #44

I am still in the progress of reading your work @conventurecomics, hope you may hit the second milestone soon.

SoulSean 2022-04-09 06:17:03 UTC #45

@deniantonio, sorry for taking such a long time to watch your work.

I hope you can take the criticism.
Overall I like your story on an average level. I won't commend your artwork since everyone has their perspective in representing their work.
Artwork - null
Grammar - I guess there is much room to improve as this was also one of my greatest nemesis of all time.
Storyline - Great! The opening is excellent and able to pull me till the end.

Hope to see your improved work in future.

SoulSean 2022-04-09 06:32:34 UTC #46

Hi @Cathy_OG
It is my first try in an attempt to read LGBT stories. Fortunately, I didn't feel any uncomfortable feeling upon reading your stories. Caroline sure does represent our present teenage or early adult problem in society. Keep up the excellent work! Your novel will be the first of my first subs toward the LGBT genre.

Nada 2022-04-09 13:27:30 UTC #47

What a big scare, I thought it was something bad, not at all, thanks for reading, please don't worry, the same thing happens to me with certain types of genres. A hug xD

SoulSean 2022-04-09 16:27:14 UTC #48

You have four series in a row. Mind if I'm asked which one did you favor the most? @sevenstarsofeightIam

UntappedChaos 2022-04-09 20:04:46 UTC #49

I'll be sure and give your novels a look. It's always hard to give critique when you don't know whether it's welcome or not, but at the same time...when you're really hoping for critique and you can't get any it's so freaking frustrating. @_@

I just posted my first webnovel to Tapas today.

Neighborhood Noxie is an Arthurian-esque fantasy adventure with chapters around 550w long. If you, or anyone you know, loves The Ancient Magust' Bride, Mushishi, or Natsume Yuujinchou, this series would be right up the same alley as it were. I hope you enjoy it if you give it a shot. <3

sevenstarsofeightIam 2022-04-09 22:16:31 UTC #50

@SeanChin

The Faerie Dusters was my first novel, spanning years and multiple edits. I have an emotional bond with the characters, so naturally, I like it first.

I had plans for The Space Bum since about the same time, back in the early 90s. I only got to work on it recently. The Old Man came as a sequel, and I am planning a third book. I have seen in the process of writing these two books that my writing and characterization have improved. I feel I am on the same mental and spiritual level as Besh. By the way, I am also currently writing a prequel.

My feelings for the Star Seeders novel and its main character are mixed. Characters are based loosely on divinities: God, Jesus, Buddha, etc. I thought the concept of an atomic race seeding and reaping worlds through the aeons was worth my effort. It has been tough, as I am not especially scientific, but I like it as I have, historically, had a Jesus complex. I should say, there is a sequel coming soon.

Manyana 2022-04-10 01:48:15 UTC #51

Did anyone say fantasy?

TALIPANDAS
Genre: FANTASY, Slice of Life, Romance
Description:
When spoiled rich girl Ari's life ends, she finds herself reborn as Princess Iris in a fantasy world created by her childhood imaginary friend! But being a princess comes with being the last hope to remove an evil curse from the royal bloodline, which would be a lot easier if she hadn't inherited the most useless kind of magic in the world.
Link:

new book cover

SoulSean 2022-04-10 05:12:12 UTC #52

@UntappedChaos

I am not a professional critic. So I hope you may forgive me for what I am about to say next:
- The word red-and-brown-scent seems to be overused.
- As other members have told me about the mistake I've made in my book. Usually, the starting always covers the character's name, at least a way to mention it as a way to introduce your main characters to the reader.
- The clarification is good. I can still imagine the scenery from the word you wrote.
- The length of the first chapter just ended perfectly, love it.

I love your simple style of writing. It doesn't bored and required a lot of attention to understand and catch on the scenery.
You can master the clarify if possible. Since there was too many repeatable word in one chapter. Other than that, I am good to subs your series for further reading.

SoulSean 2022-04-10 16:48:39 UTC #53

It was nicely done, @Manyana. I love how you quote in the first chapter to let more readers know what it is all about. Your concept is spectacular. Yet, I stumbled upon your first episode gave me chills. Short but hit on point. Everything that happened surrounding her was explained thoroughly. Love it!

powerplantanimations 2022-04-10 18:54:03 UTC #54

Metrics really do be weird. I made a post earlier, but I managed to get 87 and it kept going back to 85. This happened like two times. I'm over 4000 views now.

Description: Naota Nakaoka was just your typical harem hearthrob until his life was cut short. Now he's been reincarnated .... as a stick figure. How will he be able to rebuild his harem in a world where where anime tropes (and faces) don't exist??? Find out in That Stick Figure Isekai!!! Episodes every Friday!

UntappedChaos 2022-04-10 19:20:37 UTC #55

In this case, the first chapter is supposed to be disorienting because the main character is in a relatively disoriented state. You could almost consider it a prologue more than a first chapter, since the perspective shifts afterward. <3

I'm glad the length of the chapter works! I was a little worried folks wouldn't like how short the chapters run, but maybe it'll be alright. >_<

lumisullivan 2022-04-10 23:49:15 UTC #56

I completely understand you. I've been feeling the same exakt thing recently, I have no comment, the same regulars that like my episodes and very few to none new comments. It's just as you said the view keep increasing but the engagement isn't there, it to the point where I'm wondering "who's even reading this" it really feels like ghost view. And I don't even know how to get out of this runt, like I highly doubt that adding "drop a comment/like" in the description of the episodes will do anything. I don't know...It's just such a weird situation.

esperanza163667 2022-04-11 14:58:27 UTC #57

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Shady_Kuronachi 2022-04-11 16:57:15 UTC #60

I have the same issue. Not a whole lotta likes or comments(which I love to read), but a lot of views. I wish that after reading a certain number of chapters, then you would automatically sub. I hope that all of us with this issue can get help and/or resolve it quickly.

Saint01 2022-04-11 21:56:12 UTC #61

No I am not familiar with anu webcomic that shares the same story and characters as my novel.

Remy_nuel 2022-04-11 22:11:44 UTC #62

Hey @SeanChin thanks for reading and also subscribing. Its really nice to know that you feel comfortable reading my novel. I appreciate the feedback.