I like the warm humor at the start of the first chapter, and I really got the sense that hings were gonna go south quite soon, however, I didn't feel too much of a strong investment toward Oliver enough for his alleged suicide to matter (thus far that is :U). There's nothing wrong with that though, as it can be fixed easily through flashbacks with him interacting with the other characters more, showing how truly important he was to the core of the group. Other than that, I am quite hooked as well as chilled by the last page of the last chapter, stating that Oliver's suicide may not be a suicide, that was a good introduction to the mystery 
I look forward to how it gets resolved and consider me subbed xD
Also, if you're interested, Jim's Days hasn't completely started its mystey, only beginning to apply the starting layers of it, but,check it out and see if you can solve its ultimate mystery: Who is Alice? 
