Looking for Feedback on My Comic Script

@Skychief
Tue, 27 Jun 2023 16:54:46 +0000

@Skychief wrote:

Hi everyone,

I'm new to the forum and I'm hoping to get some feedback on a comic script that I've been working on. I've been working on this script for a while now, and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism on it.

The script is a superhero story if I had to name the genre. I'm really passionate about comics/manga and I want to create something that people will enjoy reading.

I'm specifically looking for feedback on the plot, characters, dialogue, and pacing and not so much on the paneling because I kept it as simple as possible to save time and focus more on the writing of the story and dialogue. I'm open to any feedback, positive or negative, as long as it's honest and helpful.

If you're interested in reading the script, please let me know and I'll send it over. I'm really excited to hear what you guys think and I'm looking forward to learning from your feedback. Thanks in advance!

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