Looking for Proofreader for my webcomic

[CarolRiverArt]

Hi!, I'm looking for a proofreader for my webcomic " Asymmetric Victoria" .https://m.webtoons.com/en/challenge/asymmetric-victoria/list?title_no=199018 At this moment I can't offer money but I can offer music composition(demo), and quick drawings (concept art quick coloring ok). This is my first time asking for a collab. Please guide me in how these things work

[dbsmith1597]

proof read response 1:
prologue
it says on the english version why doesn't men like him exist?
i suggest why do men like him not exist or why cant men like him exist?

[dbsmith1597]

proof read response 2:
episode one
error: the boss it's calling you
correction: the boss is calling you, or the boss wants you or the boss needs you or the boss is asking for you

errror: would you like to lunch
correction would you like to go to lunch

error: smile in my face
correction smile on my face

error: Im a adult
correction: i am an adult

[dbsmith1597]

response 3

error: send
correction: sent
error: humans keeps
correction humans keep
error: and make mistakes
correction: and makes mistakes
error: i don't have idea
correction: i don't have any idea
error: in mental level
correction: on a mental level

[dbsmith1597]

Mind you I am reading this for the first time and only picking out things that don't make sense grammatically, on the english version. Idk if you wrote it in a different language or not.

[CarolRiverArt]

right know only on English version

[LadyBlut]

I can do some proofreading it will help me stay sharp. If you are still looking for proofreader.