Hey, I'm a comic artist and writer!
I thought I'd post the first chapter of my script so that I can get some new perspectives on it (especially since I'm working on this by myself)
The script is still in the need of a lot of editing, but I would really appreciate some feedback because I need this chapter to establish a lot about the story while still being interesting to the audience.
Note: there are parts with large chunks of text, simply because I'm planning on working out what happens once I get to the art part.
If you take the time to even read one page and tell me whether it interests you or not I would really appreciate it!
I'll probably end up shortening certain parts, as it does drag on quite a bit. Please let me know your thoughts!