Hi! Nice to meet you! I'm new to Tapastic too, like this night new.... I looked at your comic, and I'm not sure how helpful my thoughts will be, but here we go! Straight up, obvious omage to Star Wars. Nice 
It was very text heavy, which I personally don't gravitate to when looking for a comic to read. However, I do understand why you made this artistic choice. When The first page of a comic has a lot of text, I often will skip over that page entirely and look ahead to see what the comic's artwork looks like. If I like the art, I will then go back and invest myself and read the text. Hope that is helpful
