I need criticism and reviews for my first we novel pls I uploaded 3 chps pls read and tell me honestly is the premise good and what I have to change to make it better
Sure but could you please provide a link to the story.
I found the link @MelancholicOtaku!
But for OP, I would suggest changing your cover. It screams AI and people do NOT like that here.
https://m.tapas.io/series/My-Game-Wife-Hates-Me/info
@sarangiaman88 I have to agree please change the cover Ai isn’t allowed@Aero thanks for the link
I have left some critique on the first chapter. Here is my story if you are interested.