Hopping back to offer some thoughts!
@Frenemy I LOVE your artstyle! You have such a unique and fun way of storytelling, and I love how you've build up your comic. I wish you well in your future works.
@vishakasriram I enjoy your writing style so much. The way you describe your characters and their actions is so very interesting to read, I love it.
@JoshRaid Yeah page 4's text has been cut off, but I still think I like your comic so far. I love how easy I can follow the plot, I love the way you show off your fights. Page 5 actually has my favorite layout thus far, you're doing great.