Ah, thank you so much for your kind reply!
I'll check out your story as well!
Edit: I read it, hehe... Sooo, review time!
I like your writing style! It's so soft and soothing haha. I almost feel like the words are in pink? (does that make any sense?) Normally, I'm not really into girly stories but I felt myself captivated by the calm words. You should definitely keep that in the story!
I can't believe how many time they said toast in the breakfast chapter...! A little tip for you: try to avoid repetative words. Replace the "toast" by "it" one or two times and see what happens.
I also saw some repetition in chapter 3 (I believe?) with the word move. Some synonyms here and there will lift your story to a whole new level.
Overal, I liked the few chapters you have. I hope you update soon and keep on going!