New comic: My Loveliest Schooldays

[Bobsheese]

GOOOOooood Morning everyone! i just started a new webcomic this year As you can tell by the topic, i'm trying to get feedback for this new webcomic. Tell me what you think and what i can do to improve, i'll appreciate that yo.

Here is the description of the comic to know what to expect from it.

Chocoleta Jonovich, a great, brilliant girl raised in a terrible place. After being traumatized in an incident involving beating her professor up, and killing her principal, and then getting shot in the head. Chocoleta has given up on life, until her sister, Jolly, inspires her to relive her life again. So she attends the same school as her and tries to live happily again.

She also happens to be one of the most powerful espers alive. Treat her nicely, or she'll destroy everything.

Anyways here is the link: https://tapas.io/series/My-Loveliest-School-Days/info

Hello, and goodbye!

[Bobsheese]

Don't mind me here. I'm just waiting.

[abcde]

It feels like you're channeling ONE's drawing style. Neat!
I also think the fonts should be bigger or clearer. The dialogue is hard to read.

[Bobsheese]

Thanks! it took 3 years to get my art style to what it is now. Also, you're right about the dialogue, whenever i read it in mobile tapas, i have to zoom in all the time. I'll make the dialogue larger in the next chapter. Thanks for the feedback!