New here with a new comic! +Looking for opinions and comic reccs!

[JunCtionTea]

( ouo)/ Hello there! I only got started on Tapastic recently and I'm slooooowly crawling my way around while getting lost here and there, somehow =u=;; oops

ANYHOW--
I put up my first comic for a comedy series, M00F! and I was thinking of making it relatively weekly?
So far it has a SUPER simplistic design (I actually struggled with my mouse for awhile, eek), but I'm learning to improve, so I think it's a good start LOL, more room for improvement >:D
I would appreciate any thoughts you have on it, or even any tips on starting out (even though so far I only have one episode... WELL THERE WILL BE MORE TO COME C:)
Feel free to let me know of any comics you want me to check out (like yours!) I'm open to all genres! x))

Thank you so much for reading (and answering if possible)--
I hope you have a wonderful day/evening/whatever yooo

[TonyEsp]

why don't you try my comic is a comedy strip
https://tapastic.com/series/the-outsiders

[JunCtionTea]

I'll check it out, thanks!

[TonyEsp]

i'll look forward to your comic

[JunCtionTea]

Thank you, I look forward to yours too! x)

[KoreanTacos]

If you want to you can check my series out here: JODDAS VAPD

As for your series, I would honestly need to see more episodes, and honestly I know you're trying to make a statement on the don't judge a book by it's cover, but I dunno it's not really clear to understand with a full color screen with a melancholy expression.

[JunCtionTea]

I found replicating a simple image/drawing up to par with my current mouse maneuvering abilities, but I'll see what I can do and get to putting more episodes out!
Thank you so much for letting me know, and I'll be sure to check out your series out! ^^

[FlamingPickle]

I agree that we have to see a bit more to give some good feedback, but I for one am a fan of simple art style comics.
My strip, Red Squared Blue Squared, plays on the same idea of simple art, and I encourage you to check it out.
I'll definitely be interested to see what you have coming up.

[MissMagicGirl]

I subscribed I thought your first comic was funny!

Here is my comic: https://tapastic.com/series/magicadvisor
Its a fantasy comedy. Hope you will like it

[punkarsenic]

there's not a lot of opinions to give on m00f yet, since theres only one episode, but your ability to say something with such simplistic images is really cool!

Here's my comic, currently on hiatus, so it's a great time to read, There was a War - a fantasy about two young women falling in love in the middle of a war between giants and humans

You should also check out
SPIRE - a sci fi / fantasy about vampires on a mission to become human
les normaux - a fantasy-flavoured slice of life set up like diary entries surrounding characters in Magical!france (the writer actually has a new comic out now too, which you should definitely check out. everything he makes is brilliant)
no good heroes - a comedy about some less than perfect superheroes

[Gaspode12]

As others have said not a lot to go on so far but the strip you have is funny so thats a good start! This might be a silly suggestion but if you are struggling with drawing with a mouse and you don't have a drawing tablet have you considered hand inking and scanning in? No scanner? You might even be able to get away with a good quality digital photo. Then you can colour, edit etc once you have it on you pc.

Anyway I have two comedy series if you fancy checking them out 😊 https://m.tapastic.com/Gaspode12

[wander_creature]

Hey there! Definitely looking forward to seeing more of this! For your own consideration, I might submit Outer Spaces, a slice-of-life comic about life, anxiety, wandering creatures and space llamas.

[maar0012]

it made me chuckle a little, but still I think you should post a little more of content to show what you,re made off.
for example do what I try to do have the comic strips already draw, or wrote in somewhere in a physical form not just your mind and then when you have enough harvest that motherfucker.
I aready wrote like 4 episodes of my story, whoever is interested can check it out, it´s aout magical stuff and such:
https://tapastic.com/series/Finns-adventure-in-dreamland

[bynuwbis]

Hey there!!
Welcome to Tapastic !

The tips I would give for starters are:
1) Be consistent on posting (weekly is great)
2) Participate on the forum (you'll get to know new people/creators and find new comics! Learn and share knowledge)
3) HAVE FUN CREATING!

You only have 1 episode but I think those type of simple comics are pretty funny so hope to see more episodes soon !

My own comic is about funny situations of daily things! Feel free to check it if you like !
NuwComics

Keep up and Good luck!!

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NuwComics
https://tapastic.com/series/NuwComics

[JunCtionTea]

Thank you! and gotchaaaaa
I'll check it out C:

[JunCtionTea]

Thanks! Glad you liked it
Sure thing!!

[garrenn]

Yeah, like with everyone else it's difficult to gauge where you're going with your comic. I'm assuming it's supposed to be a simple comedy strip due to the simple design. Probably one of the better ways to go about with a simple design. I'm interested in seeing where it's going, but there's not a lot of feedback I can give.

If you want though, you can check out my comic! It's called Dreamwalker Felix and is about a grumpy teenage boy who learns he has the uncontrollable ability to enter the dreams of those around him while he sleeps. I'm getting close to the first dream sequence so I'm really looking forward to showing that off!

Also he can see ghosts.

[trinkettrancemusic]

You had me at space llamas.

[trinkettrancemusic]

Like others have mentioned, I don't have any concrete thoughts on your comic yet - I think the forthcoming context of a second page will help.

But one should never pass up an opportunity to hawk one's wares passionately, so, please check out my sci-fi/satire, The Beard about a lazy activist that thinks his beard is trying to communicate with him.

I'd also highly recommend Radiante and the weirdness of Mayim

[JunCtionTea]

(wow I just learned about putting a bunch of mentions here instead of putting a bunch of separate, it's like a revolutionary science to me)
@punkarsenic @wander_creature Thanks! Sounds interesting, I'll check those out! X)
@Gaspode12 Wow, good suggestions, thank you so much ^^ I actually have a drawing tablet //wowieee// but it ain't cooperating with me these days, so I'm just furiously clicking with my mouse pfFFT, I'll see what I can do! I love comedy, will see!
@maar0012 Thank you for the advice, of course!
@bynuwbis Awesome, thanks for the tipsssss, and yeah I'll give your comics a go ! C:
@garrenn Thanks for telling me your thoughts =) sounds like an interesting series!
@trinkettrancemusic I'll be moving slowly, but I'll do what I can with the second page, thank you!