Colour is something that if it does pop out it will have specific meaning, it was deliberate, and I have to stand ground with that, it's funny because my mom also has told me this, but at the same time I got friends who do like this B&W thing so it's personal preferences I believe.
as for the synopsis well, I guess I gotta rework it, which I haven't stop doing so ever since, I guess reading synopsis may help thanks for the tip :D!
and keep working on your stuff pretty interesting too :3c
Might need to re-read it haha to make a more elaborate opinion.
good luck and take care don't force yourself to read these many people's artwork and give yourself a treat!
Make sure other people also read other stuff amongst themselves after all it's about all of us :3c!