Hi! I’m JKnight!
Decided to make this be in the back story of my upcoming webcomic so it won’t be in the chapters that get published so why not share and critique!
It’s been rewritten though, and the rewritten version won’t be shown 
For example, when the villian gets back up after seeing the family half standing, instead of igniting his fists, his entire body surges in yellow and orange flames, taking it to the max even tho the down sides of magics begin to show, like his lips cracking from over use of fire/heat spells.
And the fight is more tactical (I hope), in my opinion.
(File size issue. You’ll see the rest in the comments section!)
