Hello!
Yes! I love you story, and your attention to details! I’m not much of a reader (due to short attention span), but I really enjoy you you work can’t wait for more!
Haha I had a lot of fun drawing from your description, it let me have a lot of creative freedom. I might have made him too Asian compared to how you described him, but it’s still kinda how I imagined him! I didn’t finish the shading though since I would probably use too much time
Hope you like it!