Hey! So I read through your comic (skimmed the middle a bit but will get back to it!) and I pretty much only have good things to say!
I see a lot of improvement from the start of your comic to the current pages. First, your line work becomes more clear. While it begins with a more sketchy feel with thinner lines, it becomes bolder in it's current state, which helps define the characters. The location of speak bubbles, their shape, and the text, really does look much more clean and easier to read and look at. The colors also become much more vibrant, which is really fun!
I guess my only critique is that sometimes, I lose the actual setting of the scene. For example, the shift from the field to the canyon seems a bit sporadic. While the shift in colors is very contrasting and well done, it is somewhat easy to lose track of how the characters shift location and how they are located in the space. For the plateau they are on, how does it relate to the overall space? While I can tell that if we are on the right side of the characters Jin is sitting on the side closer to the edge while they are in front of him, the size of the canyon is undefined. I know this is defined on the previous page, but I think that an overview panel would help with orientation.
Also, smaller suggestion, if possible, keep the bubbles off the actual characters and instead in pre-planned spaces (an example of such an overlap is the third to last panel of the latest page).
Overall, great job,congrats on a year, and best of luck with Axis and your art overall!
If you want to check out my comic please do! Feedback is always welcomed