Please could you critique my comic? I'm pretty new at this!

[Bishmuth]

Hello there lovelies!

Recently, I have been working on an entry for the Webtoons Short Story contest with @0becomingX . It has been a huge learning experience for me, since I only started making comics at the start of the year and I think it's going to level up my skills loads for when I make new pages for Fragments, which is here on Tapas!

Having finished and uploaded the first episode of the comic, I'd love if you could give me some feedback on the art side of the comic. @0becomingX made the story, so I'm sure she'd be appreciative of any feedback on the writing, but it's mostly so that I can do her writing justice in the next two episodes.

Thanks in advance for any feedback <3

Here's the comic!!

Superpose Soldier (H)

[Iris-Grimoire]

I think the art is pretty good! Something about the resolution feels off though, can't put my finger on it; but also being the contest I'd say it's best to keep moving than risking precious time with it. On the writing it's a similar deal, something feels a bit too casual about everyone being chill with aliens, but if the story needs to move gotta sacrifice a bit of suspension of disbelief.

[0becomingX]

Thanks for your feedback Iris! I'll keep that in mind for the next episodes!!! <3