Please review my book description! Is it interesting?

@Lensing Peterlensing
Sat, 24 Jan 2026 15:13:16 +0000

@Lensing wrote:

The interesting part when reading is that she has to keep mother´s death a secret.

I´m not sure what the story is about when I read the description, is the secret
the main focus? Or is the fighitng against creatures and superhuman the focus?

Another thing, I personally find it interesting when there is some room for character
development in a story like that. Like Luke Skywalker who thinks he is a farmboy
and then has to save the galaxy. The story description is a bit like she´s already
a fighter, her mother is dead and now she keeps on fighting. I would prefer
that she´s somehow pushed into her fate of stepping into her mother´s foot
steps and has to adapt to it.