Please review my book description! Is it interesting?

@theelizabethrapier Theelizabethrapier
Sat, 24 Jan 2026 16:09:28 +0000

@theelizabethrapier wrote:

This is the updated one after your feedback:

Serious and introverted Kiera Moss is the daughter of the charismatic Rebecca Moss, a legendary fighter equipped in powered armor suits called Interceptors, who fights the zombie-like wolves that appeared out of red portals, called Gashes, 30 years ago. Kiera is also the sole heir to Interceptor Technologies, the company leading the fight against the monsters.

When her mother dies on an expedition into a Gash, Kiera’s only option to save the company and the world’s main fighting force is to impersonate her mother using an advanced cloaking device. Kiera must grieve her mother in secret, fill her shoes, and figure out what went so wrong on the expedition.