if it's Just the lines we are talking about.. then I like the style. simple isn't worse than realistic and elaborate. they just have different uses.
ike, I have a gag comic, and ofc the character will be much blobbier than for my (not yet published) adventure drama.
and I think the execution of the character designs and backgounds is definitely good enough to be considered solid.
its just with the backgrounds and textures where the style becomes unelegantly mixed. (tho you got that feedback already :D)
what @artamazon said about the colors and cleanness for more reduced comics, I would, for Personal Taste (which I held back in the feedback thread) completely agree with.
I love it, personally, when a stylized and blobby line art and character designs, will also use a stylized and simplified approach to the colors and stuff. it just really takes advantage of the style-genre then :D.
but that is my personal taste ( I know I keep repeating it, but I do want it to be clear lol if you want to stick to texturing etc, there's also a lot of room to improve in that direction no doubt.)