POST 2 lines of dialogue between any Two characters from your STORY

RobertBMarks 2022-08-17 19:27:12 UTC #875

I'm going to drop a bombshell preview from this coming Friday's chapter...

Atria sat back. “What is it?”

Kaguyama took a deep breath. “I can’t give you your happy ending.”

carafox2121 2022-08-21 00:25:12 UTC #876

“My, my, Ivy.” Izara spoke through me. “Are you really going to cause such a ruckus after being asleep for so long?” my hand moved to where hers laid on my skin. I felt my fingernails dig into the back of her hand a bit before twisting it off me, and simultaneously, receding all the vines that were on Aryan, Taja, and myself. “Do you need to be reeducated?”

Ivy’s passive face exploded into a grin. Her first true expression since she crawled out of the tree. She didn’t seem to care that Izara could have been harming her. “Milady,” she spoke, breathily. “Oh, my apologies. This is not the form I am used to. How can I—”

Hipiticus 2022-09-01 23:53:02 UTC #877

“Stab me” exclaimed Corny.

“Woah woah woah” I hesitated. “Let’s do something small first.”

RobertBMarks 2022-09-02 04:37:59 UTC #878

From the chapter going live in just a couple of hours...

“I’m not the one about to murder two people,” Cap stated. “But, if you walk away, we can forget any of this ever happened.”

“Now there’s the problem,” the man in the suit said. “My associates have to deal with a god walking among men. There is no world in which that is a fair fight. There are few things I can stomach less than an unfair fight. So, we need more allies to make it a fair fight. And are you really going to try to convince me that these two are unarmed? They’ll shoot me the minute my back is turned.”

carafox2121 2022-09-03 19:58:19 UTC #879

He lifted me on top of our ‘ride’ and climbed quickly behind me. “If you fall off, I’ll never hear the end of it from the witch. So, do me a favor, and don’t.” he said just as the sphinx began to take off.

Feeling momentarily bold, and knowing I would feel embarrassed about it later, I moved my backpack to my chest, and leaned back against my familiar. “Don’t let go then.”

ghostingruby 2022-09-06 23:39:54 UTC #880

“That mirror would still be intact if you had woken me up sooner, Cervus!”

The deer rolled its eyes. “If a certain someone hadn’t shot and killed me with a crossbow, it wouldn’t have been in this situation.” He answered.

MickC 2022-09-07 14:13:30 UTC #881

“Keep that private, Antoine!” The Marchioness whispered to the Marquess in French.

“But they exchanged locks of hair like we did in Versailles.” The Marquess was a romantic gentleman when he served for the late-King Louis XVI.

RobertBMarks 2022-09-07 19:17:59 UTC #882

From the chapter going live on Friday:

“It will be okay,” Kaguyama said. “At the end of it all, it will all be okay.”

“I’ve lost every fight I’ve been in since I got here,” Atria said, wiping a tear from her eye. “I’m getting so tired of losing.”

CarltonIsaac 2022-09-16 02:20:50 UTC #883

“Steady, Iola.” Nesmir hummed in her head. “Brace yourself for impact, and push back.”

“Yes, my love.” She smiled. “Together, we can.”

RobertBMarks 2022-09-16 13:59:37 UTC #884

“But nobody in my world is happy,” The Destroyer said. “The story you wrote for me is one of misery.”

“Do you seriously expect me to explain the basics of narrative to you?” Matoyami sneered. “Nobody wants to watch a story about everybody being happy. They want conflict, and they don’t care what it looks like so long as lots of people get hurt in it. The bigger the conflict, the more they enjoy it. And for that, the story needs a devil king, and that’s you.”

CarltonIsaac 2022-09-16 15:45:26 UTC #885

“Oh, Kadrek!” Rubia cried excitedly then quickly began smoothing out her tattered dress in embarrassment.

“So Kadrek, all well with your blood debt?” Hari asked.

“Yes.” The towering Diabaine nodded. “Eldrek is well pleased by my work. He approaches now to address you.”

queen_of_spades 2022-09-16 16:56:27 UTC #886

hello
my novel has short episodes - it's a fantasy romance novel.

Rodrigo_Silveira 2022-09-16 17:35:40 UTC #887

“I could lift you up...” Tomas hummed softly as they pedaled.
“I could show you what you want to see And take you where you want to be…” Axl maintained their tradition of singing while they went to school.

Project: DELTA

carafox2121 2022-09-18 02:04:30 UTC #888

“How’s Izara?” Samara asked, staring up at Aryan before gifting me a small smile.

“Seriously? You sleep for two days and the first thing you ask about is the goddess that put you in this state?” he rolled his eyes at her, which, honestly, surprised me. He seemed to have no energy to even feign distaste towards me, but suddenly, he has all the strength for Samara?

RobertBMarks 2022-09-24 22:34:06 UTC #889

“We are right now working on a sequel to Chronicles of Arcaniana,” Takahashi said. “We will be able to modify the character descriptions for some time. This would allow us to pass messages to people in the game by putting the knowledge of it into their character description. Is there anything you would like anybody in the game to know, such as your parents, or party members?”

Stella leaned against the wall and took a deep breath. “Please let them all know that I’m living in another world, where I met a wonderful man named Adam who I’m going to marry.” She wiped more tears from her eyes. “And please let them know that I miss them all very much, every day, and I wish I could be with them again just one more time.” She sobbed. “I’m sorry, it’s been a long time I’ve gotten any sleep.”

korivernon 2022-09-28 16:58:10 UTC #890

These two lines are after Acalea is telling one of the main characters how trust is a critical part of relationships and how they'll always fall apart without it.
‘No! Don’t be silly! I can save my relationship! It hasn’t fallen apart!’
‘I’m not being silly. Your relationship has already fallen apart’'

RobertBMarks 2022-09-29 19:31:48 UTC #891

From tomorrow's chapter:

Mitsubi nodded. “I guess old age and death is rather simple in the story you’re from.”

“No,” Cap said, shaking his head. “Not really. People get old, and their hair goes white. They get weaker, and can’t do as much as they once could. Then, one day, they’re just gone.” His voice broke. “And all you’ve got left of them is your memories and a few keepsakes. So, it might be simple for the ones who pass, but it’s anything but that for those of us left behind.”

CarltonIsaac 2022-10-04 16:53:11 UTC #892

“He was never my lord and master, rookie.” Kargan laughed, his cold eyes boring into Iola’s through Esamus. “Though I admit, he has never looked more out of character. I see your woman has well and truly taken over his mind.”

“That is indeed her gift, as you well know.” Nesmir glanced at Iola’s physical form in chains.

qimao 2022-10-05 02:20:31 UTC #893

"I'm sorry I've been so useless lately," Tsu said, finally able to string together a few words. "I didn't mean to make you bring me all of this. I should've been able to get up and get them myself." She paused, then finished with a whisper, "I'm sorry I was such a bother." When she looked at him she could tell he was surprised, but he tried not to show it.

"It's never a bother," he said, handing her the glass of water. "I just want to make sure you're okay."

LackofCoffee 2022-10-05 03:37:15 UTC #894

“I thought I told you to give me a minute.” Beau snapped at the guard, his calm, gentle demeanour gone.

“Yeah and counted to sixty, twice actually. I lost count the first time.” The guard replied so matter-of-factly that Lukas couldn’t tell if he was being rude or sincere.