i think i'm pretty proud of this part that i wrote but this part is not out yet
it's part of my first draft
I can't move. All I can see is the color black. It's as if there are eyes staring right at me from this blanket but I can't see them. Why? I begin to walk cautiously and scanning the area. "Hello?" I ask. But all I can hear is my voice echoing into the abyss and no response.