Thank you so much! I'm really happy you like the look of it!
And I agree on the action, especially in the beginning. Been trying to get better in more recent chapters but it's been difficult getting myself to loosen up, haha!
I went ahead and read your comic, too, so I'll toss some thoughts here!
+: Your characters' personalities shine through really well, and Flare is a great plucky lead to follow! Love the art progression too, you just keep getting better!
-: I felt like the fight with Shade was odd, writing wise. I know Flare is young and hot headed, but she seemed to jump to violence for no reason--he wasn't threatening her with anything until after she attacked. It felt more like, "I planned for a fight to be here, so it's happening" instead of "this fight is coming naturally from the circumstances in the comic". Does that make sense? :o