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[HarisADevine]

Not sure how things work here. If I have a new comic project, can I post a description, image, link here?

The author of this topic wants a opinion about his comic series, or more precisely, their art style. Then, she gives a opinion on the art style of your comic.

So, if you haven't made a comic series yet, go rather make your own topic about it.

[lastpizzaslice1]

Actually I was supposed to be walking in tht park with my friend but obliviously i should've drew the legs more "walking". Sorry about that and i will definitely check your comic.

[maelstrom51210]

Whee! Thank you very much!

[Fawkestrotart]

One thing I would critique is watching how you draw the head, sometimes the balance is off. For example in the 4th strip 80% of the hair looks to be on one side with the rest of the head kind of squished on the other, it's a problem I use to have myself so I was a bit extra conscious about it or else I would get dinged in storytelling class. Also be sure to keep an eye out for lines crossing over other objects next to or in front of another.

Your style is very simple, easy to read and your jokes are pretty spot on and relatable. Keep at it!!

Here's my latest post if you want to take a look ---> Code Basis

[TristanJensen]

I gave your comic a read and I thought it was really cool. I'm definitely subscribing to it

Heres my comic I guess http://tapastic.com/series/Life-of-a-Homeschooler

[lastpizzaslice1]

I really didnt understand that head problem. Sorry about the lines crossing each other. I will check your comic for sure

[lastpizzaslice1]

Thank you. Your comic is so fun to read. xD I used to draw stickmen comics on my school books and thats why i love your drawing style. Guess I will just have read your 79 episodes

[Fawkestrotart]

"Squished" may have been a poor choice of words on my part, sorry about that.

But I was talking about how the character's hair was falling with their back to us in episode 4. It doesn't seem balanced, as if they were leaning a taste to the right.

Or maybe it's just me haha

[lastpizzaslice1]

aha I get it. thanks for the advice

[ZelEnkora]

here's mine! its called Broken Chains, its actually a manga! check it out if u like manga!

[AnnaLandin]

Hi, @lastpizzaslice1! I'm the creator of Grassblades, a fantasy-adventure story featuring the grumpiest main character you'll ever meet, and a very quiet little girl. I've somehow missed your other threads (shocking, I know! I'm usually everywhere around here XD), but I'll take the opportunity to weigh in on this one.

Do you mind if I give you some general tips beyond the art itself? Because a few things struck me while I read.

1.) The description of your comic - the one that's up in the top left corner. You've got the words "lol (i am obliviously bad with descriptions)" in there. You should probably get rid of that; telling people you're bad at something is NOT the best way to convince them to read your comic. Be confident!

2.) It is possible to have a good, funny comic where the art is not 100% perfectly awesome all the time (I don't think ANY of us are 100% perfectly awesome all the time; I know I'm not!), but one thing that IS good to strive for is consistency. I notice that this is lacking in some aspects of your art. For example, the main character (who I assume is a version of you?) and the way you draw her; sometimes, you draw her hair with very thin lines, but in the next panel, it's drawn with very thick lines. Picking one type of line and sticking with it, at least for the entirety of one comic strip, is a good idea, IMHO.

Drawing funny comics is a tougher challenge than it seems, but I think you've made a good start here! Keep working at it, and you'll find it gets easier as you can both skills and confidence. Good luck!

[lastpizzaslice1]

That was just a temporary description till i find out what to write. About the lines problem, I believe I did fixed this problem in my last comic or did the problem still exist?. After checking your comic, i really like the way you draw. It is really suitable for our series.

[lastpizzaslice1]

I am not really into manga but i checked it. Your background are really good but i noticed that your draw the chin a bit to the left although the face isnt leaned. I dont know maybe its just me. xD

[AnnaLandin]

@lastpizzaslice1 The latest comic is better! So if you're already working on it, keep it up!

Also, thank you!

[lastpizzaslice1]

I just read my reply again now xD sorry for the mess but i just woke xD Anyways i edited it now.

[Dranif]

Its very interesting. I could relate to the episode about your schedule (haha...I just so happen to be procrastinating on a comic myself right now, have been for almost a month....oops....) and I see a lot of improvement from your first page in the new one. Heh, I'm still laughing at the joke in it.

Mine if you're interested:
Legend of John the Parakeet (The serious story that I've been putting the most focus on lately. Pages are best read right to left.)
Randomness of Chibi Wognif (This is the one I've been procrastinating... but feel free to read it anyway.)

[lastpizzaslice1]

Thanks for subscribing and for your compliments ofcourse i will check your comics for sure

[GFalconDX]

I like the humor in the comic. I can see that you're improving with each page. I can also relate to the 3rd page marked "My Schedule" especially when it comes to my comic. Also, I want to point out the latest page which the BG keeps changing in each panel. Are they walking by any chance? I'm not sure if they were walking or standing, but I just want to point that out.

Please check out my comic The Chronicles of SolLuna if you're interested.

[ZelEnkora]

hmm, which chapter did u check out? the 1st or the 9th? (ty for doing so)

[danitasibert]

your comic looks SUPER cute!
its always good to work with a style that you like and just continue to grow from that point on, it will form to your liking and grow with you as long and you are willing to take risk and experiment with it.

i my comic is just starting and i am so very excited about it!
http://tapastic.com/danitasibert/series