Post your "You messed with the wrong person" scene and I will subscribe(Sub for a Sub)

HaltArrtay_RangerGod 2020-09-04 03:34:35 UTC #21

Sweet, I rarely get an opportunity to boast about something.

simplykit 2020-09-04 04:40:45 UTC #22

cool! i love those scenes. its like you dont even know who you messin with moments lol

this one comes to mind... episode 48, last scene

from my manga

AilyneGouveia 2020-09-04 11:28:16 UTC #24

I can't putt the whole scene here, so i just drop that here.

There are a lot of these moments in my comic now that i think of it. If you like to see the whole scene of this one here is the link : https://tapas.io/episode/1712720

Hazumirein 2020-09-04 18:23:16 UTC #25

No need to sub, but this scene jumps to mind as one of a few. Kody is a happy-go-lucky bean most of the time and it takes a lot to get under his skin, but you also don't really want to catch him in a bad mood.

Kody surveyed the room, then bent down and picked up the book, shutting it. “Okay, let’s just...postpone this meeting for now,” he said. “We can come back to this later.”

Slowly, everyone began to file out, not a word being said.

Kody nudged the catatonic Katarina. “Come on,” he said. “Let’s just go home.”

Kat managed a shaky nod, and followed him out the door.

“Going somewhere?”

Kody stopped walking abruptly, and Kat nearly ran into him. Peaking around him, Kat internally groaned at the sight of the coyote girl. Kody just sighed. “What now?”

“I’ve come for your RSVPs,” she said, grinning maniacally as usual. “We have a party to plan, you know. Need a head count. Or a body count, you decide.”

Kody didn’t answer. Instead, he walked to her, grabbed a hold of her shirt collar, and lifted her up like she was nothing. He held her so she was at eye level with him. “Tell your boss or whatever that I’ll be there. The rest are undecided," he said, then paused and took a breath. "And if I see you again before then,” he snarled, and Kat swore she spotted the points of a set of fangs, “I can assure you that you will not be in any condition to attend.” With that, he tossed her aside, and she landed on her behind some distance away before scrambling to her feet. “Now get lost,” Kody said sharply.

The coyote took a few steps back, her grin long gone, then turned tail and disappeared into the woods across the street.

NellieVP318 2020-09-04 19:31:58 UTC #26

Hello, You have no obligation to sub to my work. But I just love to post up this scene since I waited until my upload date to post this. It is the best " You messed with the wrong person" scene I could find in my story.

Summary

Suddenly she heard the guy said, "Bitch". Leticia saw Raleigh moving backwards away from the guy, trying to avoid him. The guy didn't give up and insisted to stalk after Raleigh. The guy's face looked red like a tomato, then tried to grab Raleigh's arm in haste. It didn't take too long for Leticia to get involved with this. She marched over between the two before the guy tried to manhandled Raleigh. Leticia moved her foot and stepped on the guy's foot to get him to stop bothering Raleigh. She gave an icy glare at him as guy whined in pain and still angry. Leticia didn't filch when the guy gave her the same stare back.

"Is there a problem here?" Leticia asked the guy as she turned her glance at Raleigh, then back at the guy.

"I'm just being friendly here, you now? Your little troublemaker band mate is the problem. I just wanted her number and maybe meet up at a hotel together later. She should be grateful that people like me, even give her attention." The guy answered Leticia. Leticia then which glance back at Raleigh to learn her side of the story.

"I told him to leave me alone. He started making feel me uncomfortable. I already saw this dude twice before earlier today, and he kept on following me even after I asked him to leave. " Raleigh used her voice as her hands were trembling while she told Leticia this. Leticia knew she had to handle this in a way to get this guy off Raleigh's case. Just hearing the guy's sudden change of behavior was enough for Leticia to go by to try scaring him off.

"Look, could you just leave my band mate alone? She isn't interested in you. You already made your move more than twice and she said, no. Now fuck off, you creep." Leticia spoke in a harsh tone. She had no patience dealing with entitled people tonight. Leticia removed her feet off the guy's foot so he could get away from them.

Wocalich 2020-09-04 22:25:51 UTC #27

This scene:

I could feel the magic swirling through my veins, threatening to burst out, begging to be let free. I shook with the effort of keeping it under control--or should I let it free?
"Psetha."
I didn't realize my hair beginning to turn white and getting shorter. I didn't feel my eyes swirl golden.
Blağo took a step back and gulped again.
"Psetha!" Bilana yelled and slapped me across the face.
When had she got in between the kid and me? As the magic calmed down, all I could say was, "You slapped me?"
She flinched and winced like she felt a ghost of my pain but didn't back down. "I'm sorry for hitting you, but you were losing control of yourself."
"He's Blağo."
"No," she said firmly. "He's just a child. Look at him, Psetha. Look at how much you've scared him."
I turned to look behind Bilana at the boy and my blood froze.
He was shaking and crying, unable to even run away, and he had wet himself.
I had scared a child to this point.
I kneeled on the golden field and bowed my head, wincing when the child flinched at my movement.
"I'm sorry," I whispered, and silence fell.

Because it's just wrong to mess with a child

elisabeth_ist 2020-09-04 22:41:33 UTC #28

This certainly is a Moment. (Anyone who's reading my novel right now is going to be like "WTF?!" because this does not fit with what's happening in the chapters I've currently posted. But you'll see. Things happen. Slow-burn plot, as I've said.)

She found herself staring into the grinning face of Crump. He appeared to be alone. His pistol glinted from inside his pocket.

“I thought I recognized you,” he hissed. “Little bitch who wouldn’t shut up in the shop. New around here, aren’t you? Well. You’d have had to get to know me eventually.”

Hannah fought with everything she had. She threw wild punches at his broad chest and kicked him as hard as she could and screamed loudly and hoarsely for help, but it was no use. Nobody came. Crump dragged her backwards and pinned her neck against the brick wall of one of the houses, constricting her windpipe. Hannah began gasping for breath. She had no air left to scream with.

“The question is,” said Crump, and she could smell what she was sure was celebratory champagne on his breath, “what’s the best way for us to acquaint ourselves with each other? There’re a number of ways we could go about it. What do you think, little miss?”

He moved his hands so that he was holding her by the armpits instead. Hannah coughed painfully, gathered her strength, and kicked him in the stomach as hard as she could. He was so stocky that he hardly winced.

“Feisty,” he said, grinning. “Plucky. I like that.”

He ran a hungry finger across her collarbone. Chills erupted down Hannah’s spine, but she used his second of distraction to plunge her free arm into her coat pocket and draw out the set of keys Brenna had given her.

She shoved the metal points into his chest with the last bit of strength she had—then, in a flash of inspiration, she bit down hard on his arm. She tasted blood; she bit harder—

“What the fuck!”

Crump yelped and took an angry step backwards; his other arm slipped from the wall and held Hannah there somewhat less forcefully than before. But she knew she couldn’t run yet. She knew she would have only one shot.

“I’ve just turned you into a werewolf,” she said, as mildly as she could, though she wanted to keep biting him—kicking him—hurting him—until he was nothing but a pulpy mess on the ground. “I bet you didn’t know that we can spread it while we’re still human. We can, if it’s a day or two before the full moon. Once our senses get stronger.”

This was, of course, total nonsense, but she was banking on the idea that he wouldn’t know that. His face instantly turned an odd kind of green.

HaltArrtay_RangerGod 2020-09-04 22:44:15 UTC #29

Can I get a link? I would love to get some more context from your novel.

elisabeth_ist 2020-09-04 22:46:03 UTC #30

Ha, sure! Though this excerpt comes, like... ten-ish chapters from what's happening now. Right now my protagonist's having a miserable time at a wedding. Has no idea of what's ahead of her, poor thing.

indagold 2020-09-05 02:32:52 UTC #31

Main character breaks the last bonds that keep his demon under control. Not to mention this is the only scene you can see how massive this demon is.