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Jul 2023

I have subbed your story and will read it. I hope you will sub mines.

REVIEW
The Deadliest Assassin's Reset is well written. I also like the story premise...it reminds me of God of Blackfield webcomic here at Tapas. I liked the action and Flynn fleeing his pursuers. The scenery blazed with color and light. Erun, ah, Erun a formidable, once friend, now enemy appeared as no joke for Flynn; I felt his heart break.

Now dealing with the mechanics, I think making the updates smaller will help with the readers digesting a little at a time, making this story more memorable. I also found a lot of details I skimmed over due to repetition.

However, you did describe your characters wonderfully with clarity, which I loved. Again, make sure your updates are shorter to heighten our retention and reading ability. That would help so much. Reading on the internet, for me, is very, very challenging rather than reading paperbacks or books.

I want to mention that I've subbed your comics/novel and hope you'll check out mines and sub too!

@maskscomic - Masks: Regeneration has great sequential paneling! I love that flaming head opponent!

@PenguinAngel - The Monkey Prince and the Five Treasures is so enjoyable...he's got lots of spice!

@hanielmea - I'm really enjoying Magical Girls, and Chaos, keep up the good work!

Thanks everyone for your cool comics/novels and @hanielmea for sharing this thread!

I'm also new to the site and just published my first web novel here, but not the first I've written.
A fantasy-romance story about a girl who almost got sold to the slave market and a boy with a knack for bloodshed:

If you happen to be a random stranger who stumbles upon my work and leave a like and sub, I may do the same once I log back on the site!

[PG18+]

Read Here: Where Destiny Called Us and Tore Us Apart

Thanks a lot! I really appreciate the honest review <3 I'll keep your suggestion in mind hehe. Honestly, it's an eye opener for me! Hope to see you around in this platform hehe~

Thanks for your opportunity :blush: This is my novel. Free to read.

Enjoy :blush:

Daphne Yalle: When the great nation Neptune invades her land, Daphne's peaceful life soon changes drastically. And because she is a Neptunian-Plutonian - owns the same ethnicity as the Neptune invader country - Pluto residents hate her ethnicity very much it leads to a provoking conspiracy that traps her and her entire ethnic group as genocide victims. Fortunately, at the last moment, she was saved by Stairmount Rivers, one of the lecturers at her university. Stairmount's heroic actions immediately make Daphne fall in love with Stairmount, without realizing that the mysterious quiet man holds many secrets, some of which are even very dark and have the potential to bring Daphne to the deepest scrap of affliction.

Stairmount "Schynn" Rivers: As a citizen of Jupiter descended from Saturn Country, it is very awkward for Stairmount as he can live legally in Pluto, especially since Pluto is at war. Yet, maybe he must be grateful for this 'awkward' destiny - so that he can save Daphne, that beautiful girl who captures his heart for the first time in his life. His deep love for her even leads him to be willing to risk his own life to save her. But the price for this love is too dreadful, as to pay for the consequence, he is then forced to sin against the land of his ancestors - with the lives of the people he loves as the captives to force him to commit this unforgivable sin.

Commending creativity with likes. My novels.

I’m kinda new to all and a little nervous but I shouldn’t be shy promotion is what this forum is all about haha! Anyways let me introduce you all to this lovely webcomic

Consumey Cafe!

After their boss Chess had finally had their last straw with their longtime rivals Consumey Cafe, Pip Lionheart was sent out to work as an undercover “spy” at the esteemed restaurant. The goal was to uncover their suspected “secret ingredient” but after poking their noses where they shouldn’t be, they were left with more questions than answers.

Genres: Horror/Thriller, Mystery, Drama, Comedy, LGBTQ/Queer, Slight Romance

Please consider checking it out, a lot of love goes into it not only by me but also by all my friends whose helped me out with this!! Consumey Cafe is some of my best work and I’m so happy I finally am i begging to share it! :heart:️

Just read your work-it's really nice! Your art is good and the handling of the tones is really nice! I subbed to you :slight_smile:

Feel free to check out my work! It's a supernatural action manga :slight_smile:

Here's my comic!


Hybrid: Humanity

Genre: Fantasy / Action

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Description: A story about a half-demon teenage girl lost in a world where everyone is out to get her.

Back in the 1800s, demons invaded Earth and took a sum of their land. Of course, it starts a new era with pre-established pools of magic on both sides at war. Along with that many discoveries are made from the burning bridge between the realms.

Check out my novel, Alex: The Soul Wielder! Drop a like and sub if you liked what you're reading.
Always open to thoughts so leave some comments on the same! :grinning:

Genre: Action Fantasy, HUmor, Adventure and more!

Alex a 16 year old boy who had recently started at his new boarding school, finds a strange item, seemingly made of wood. But little does he know it was going to change his life forever.

As he learns to wield the powers of the soul beast inside the soul holder, fate pulls him onto a road filled with adventures, friends, difficult choices, action, love and many more.

Will Alex be able to win with the cards dealt to him by life or will he fail?

Ive been working on this novel for a bit and thought it would be a cool idea to link it in the fourms!

I really appreciate all likes and subs... (thx for reading this btw)