Wow, what a nice thing to put your time in. I always LOVE feedback (good and bad) as it helps me grow. Strangely similar in name and genre as yours too...
Here's mine, Voidchild (a bit of a long read though):
EDIT: I just realized that you said "novel" not comic so nvm (though feel free either way)!
I am not being rude. Please put some more sketching and as for artwork everyone have their own style. Story is quite good though can't argue with that
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Wow, your work looks interesting
Here's Mine: Genre: Fantasy/ Parallel Dimension
I start reading from 19 chapter. So, I can't understand but after complete reading, I saw that I was reading 19 chapter then I start to read from chapter 1. It's interesting.
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I would really appreciate if someone read mine. I would return the favor
I updated and first published episode one of my historical romance, drama-packed novel entitled 'Til Death Do Us Apart, this past Monday. It is going to be updated again latest tomorrow (Thursday) afternoon. If you subscribe to my work, I will do the same for your work(s)!
Well written. The world building was good. but can you tell me why a man put hand on character's shoulder?
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I usually do not read this type of novel. Whatever, I am curious to know about the prayer you wrote in the first chapter. Is it what the father prays in church during a marriage?
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