@jonofowkes
The art is really nice. I love the effort you put into backgrounds and how you really know how to play with values. I love how you played around with perspective, and your art comes off a lot stronger because of it.
Suggestions:
Try experimenting with line weights (and by that I mean having a variance in your lineart by making some parts thinner/thicker). I do like the sketchy texture of your lineart, but it does make some parts of your panels really hard to read (like the 4th panel in ep1).
Readability is really important, so I would definitely suggest you to plan out your panels and dialogue bubbles in the future by adding more spaces.
I also noticed that you made a few light/shadow mistakes, especially in the first episode. The knight is holding the only source of light but the shadows are not consistently showing the shadow going in the opposite direction (for example the third panel where the lantern is on right side of the knight but there is a lack of a shadow beneath the lantern and the shadow is located behind the knight instead of going the opposite way)
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here's my action romance 
: https://tapas.io/series/Kill-Your-Darlings
