Quick anatomy/redlining help?

[travelercomic]

So I'm having a little issue with this panel. It's mostly his arm in the foreground holding his sword, but I'm sure there's other stuff kind of off as well.

If there's anyone available for redlining I'd greatly appreciate it!!!

[alarnia]

Try sketching the full figure, then crop it to fit into your panel.

[travelercomic]

Well the issue is mostly the arm perspective. The one holding the sword.

[XzynderVexymous]

If you still can’t get it, try to make the pose yourself. Then, you’ll be introduced to things you didn’t see before.

[Wumbl]

Do you have any images you could use as pose reference?

[Mocha]

The sword (at least I think that's what he's holding so correct me if I'm wrong) is throwing off a lot of the perspective with the character. You have the sword going upwards but with the way the rest of the drawing is, it should be coming towards the viewer. Sorry I can't help much I'm on my phone orz

[axolotulz]

Try stock photos for reference.
IE:

[Chrispykreme]

ok, part of the problem is that the centre of balance is off - the figure looks off-kilter, like they're going to fall over, so you'll want to nudge the stuff you've drawn in red over to the right, until the centre of the crotch is pretty much in line with the handle of the sword.
the second thing is that Mocha is right - the blade of the sword is not in the right perspective - if you draw the blade shorter, maybe in line with the character's mouth or chin, I reckon it would look a bit better. The redline perspective on the arm is actually pretty well drawn, so I don't think that's the issue.

[travelercomic]

Thanks for all the advice guys! I tweaked it a bit, but found that it was so small it wasn't really a huge deal. I'll show you all the page though if you're curious!

also this is a capture rather than the exported file (that's on my colorists pc lol) so the words are a teensy bit blurred. You get the idea though.