So, I was thinking, since its hard for people to get comments on their works, be it a novel or a comic..., I believe it'd be great to have a dynamic in which we read the first chapter of any person that comments on our work.
Instructions
- Participate in this thread by sharing your story via link, summary and cover. The story you share is the one that will receive the comment. (Please include the link, summary and a cover/banner if it has one)
- Pick a story from the ones shared and read the first chapter.
- Comment on that chapter and if you like the story then sub to it! (Include in that comment that you come from the Tapas forum, this so the person knows to return the favor)
- The comment must be relevant to what you read, doesn't matter what as long as its something you would like yourself to receive
(It can be a honest reaction or opinion on something in the chapter, don't feel pressured to write a formal review)
- Even if the reader doesn't sub to your story, you must comment back!
- If its a comic episode and its too short (say one page per episode) then read at least three episodes.
Let's encourage each other and find great stories in the process 
I'll start by sharing my story. Whoever comments will receive a comment back from me on their first chapter! This should be the same for everyone who receives a comment, they must comment back!
Ps. Before commenting on my story, please share your story in the thread so others can comment on yours as well!
Summary: In a tranquil city, the Ikari brothers live their daily lives relying on one another. However, what will they do once a suspicious fog appears? Will they manage to carry on or will derangement tear apart what they once knew?
