I checked out your comic. Now I am not a comic artist but let me give you an honest opinion. Your artstyle is well done--it seems unique and it stands out. I found one grammar issue but that's not that big of an issue. (I wasn't reading the entire thing though).
Now you have been complaining about not getting enough people reading your story. The thing is a lot of us only get noticed when we are lucky enough to get on the main front page of Tapas. My honest opinion is that you weren't chosen yet is quite frankly because of the dark themes in your "comedy" comic. Your artstyle is so children-like that is it just bizarre to suddenly read about suicide and seeing blood and mentions of sex. The themes are clashing. Now is this a bad thing? No. You have your own unique style. You could consider it something like happy tree friends. However, don't expect to be chosen for the front page. Tapas is a private company and they have a right to promote only what they want to be the face of Tapas. Your comic is too dark for that.
My suggestion is to consider what you are drawing if your goal is fame and monetization. You have to understand the demographic on Tapas too. Your situation is the same as if someone went to a gay bar looking for a straight partner. Is there a chance you will find someone? Yeah, but that's not what the bar is for. It's the same thing here. Either draw for your passion and if you are lucky, your comic will blow up. Or care about monetization and get with the system. One thing is for certain. Complaining will NOT help you and will only keep people and potential readers away from you.
