Reboot of novel. Asking opinion about new cover [CLOSED]

@domisotto Domisotto
Mon, 18 Jan 2021 15:02:31 +0000

@domisotto wrote:

I gave it as an example. Your description is vague, so to me, it doesn't really trigger my interest. I need to see what you are selling in the logline. And the way your logline is written, you are asking me questions about something I haven't read. You are not selling me on reading it, because I am not here to hunt for puzzles. I want to know what the story is to decide if the premise and characters are worth checking out or not. For that, a logline, for me, needs to put the biggest, reddest strawberies on top of the box.