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Aug 2017

Hi everyone! Nice to meet you all!

I am Cassava, your friendly neighborhood tapioca! :grinning:
I've been lurking around here for quite awhile now and has finally decided to sign up and write a novel. This is my first attempt at publishing a novel online, so any feedback will be welcomed! I am mainly a Sci-Fi and Fantasy geek, but I am fine with any genre too!

My novel: Of Steel and Stones10
Please feel free to take a look at my novel! I am always on the look out for something to read, so feel free to recommend your works to me too! :smile:
Once again, glad to be here!

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Oh hey. Same here, I kinda am new here, and signed up for Tapas a little less than a month ago.
I'm Heliox. Nice to meet you guys. I CAN write any genre, and I'm open for any co-op work, just as long it doesn't involve my 0% art skills.
Please feel free to look at my novel, Background People: https://tapas.io/series/Background-People2
Welcome to Tapas, Cassava, and I hope you enjoy your time here.

Oh hey there friend :smiley: Nice to see you on the forums. Welcome to Tapas <3

Hi Heliox! Just read through Background People! :grinning:
Will be waiting for the next chapter!
I would like to do a co-op work one of these days!(Once I get better at writing, that is :grin:) I can definitely relate to having 0% art skill too!

I just started reading and it looks good! I have one little critique thou. Most people don't say the name of the person they are taking to very often. Other than that I am intrigued with where the story is going.

Aye. I'll also be waiting for your next chapter. Stuff's getting a whole lot interesting in those parts, I'm telling you.
You're also pretty good at writing...can I ask your opinion on how to keep the story going? Because I'm kinda worried that it is becoming kinda bit draggy in the drafts...
But yeah, best of luck to you for everything else!

Oh yes, I do agree with that! I'll try and find more ways for names of characters to be introduced naturally! Thanks for the feedback! :grin: I will take note for my subsequent chapters!

Yeah, hope to see more writers around these parts too! :grinning:
Hmm, may I know what do you mean by "draggy"? As for me, I tend to end a chapter when there is a change in scenario or when someone just made an noteworthy statement. I think the impact of the statement will be stronger this way. This is just my two cents though! :slight_smile: So far, just from your introductory chapter, your story still piques my interest!
Best of luck to you too!

Oh....okie! Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on Chapter 3 soon.

Hii there! Welcome to World of comics and books!

Welcome to Tapas, I hope you'll make friends and find that we are all nice enough people!

Welcome to Tapas.
Honestly, I've been here since March 2015, but I'm new to this too, so I need help with you...
The best advice I can give you is expect nothing, but be thankful for everything, and to also make friends along the way. Connect for the sake of growth, not business.
Nice to meet you too, I'm Cydonia.

Hi! :grin: I'm already thankful for the warm welcome I've been receiving!
Yeap, definitely for growth! Hope I will improve much more with the help of the forum than when I was writing alone. It can be hard without some friends to share one's writing woes with!
Nice knowing you too! :grinning:

Yeah, you need a certain trust level on the forum to send someone a private message, and I think how you do it is to go into someone's profile, and un the top right hand corner there should be a blue box that says "message". And to private message on the actual Tapas website, go to post something on someone's wall and click the box that says "private" and it will create a private message.
I hope that makes sense :wink:

I see! Managed to find both the blue box and the private box! This would probably have taken me awhile to figure out on my own. Thanks for the info! :smile:

Eyo! I'm Bones, and I read your book Of Steel and Stones, trust and believe I'll be there for future updates!

If you want, there is a Discord community that I run where you can meet other creators (novels & comics). I'll be dropping my novel Flight of Fantasy I in early 2018, so I hope we can bounce ideas off each other.

It's nice to meet you. I'm WinterRobinhood! I gave your novel a look and I'll be around for more! Welcome to the community, I'm a writer as well and right now I'm working on Saints and Sinners1, a fantasy novel. If you're interested, feel free to check it out~! :slight_smile:

But I hope you enjoy yourself here!

Welcome! Thanks for sharing your book, I've got it in my list now too. I dig writing fantasy stuff myself (dark, admittedly) so it's nice to meet a somewhat like-minded soul.

Thanks for the support! This means a lot to me :grinning:
Sure! Will be happy to join said community, I'll just have to figure discord out first :sweat_smile:
please do let me know what you will need for me to join! Thanks again!

Thank you! :grinning: Just checked out your page, and I am impressed you have some many series already planned out. I will check them out too! I do like dark fantasy too, since it is always nice to delve into different forms of a particular genre :grin: (That said, I love dark souls and bloodborne. I think they do qualify as dark fantasy games? Haha!)
Nice to meet you too!

I'm interested...how do I join?

Hi Xzynder! :grin:
I've read Earth's Immigrants and kept it in my list! It has an interesting premise, and I will be waiting for more!

Welcome to Tapas, I'm a little wary of reading online novels that don't go through an editing process, as repetitive grammatical mistakes break my immersion. Please don't take that as a personal slight or that I'm automatically saying your novel is bad, just have had some bad experiences with some works I've actually paid money to read in the recent past. That said I'll give your work a look at some point, and am always glad to network with other people working creatively. I'm the writer for my comic, so very little drawing skill here.

Hi fleetinginfinity! :smile:
Gotta admit I'm still learning how to write properly at the moment. I've been checking out other novels I see on Tapas, so I hope I will improve as I read and write!
Your art is way better than I will probably ever achieve! I just don't have the talent for drawing, sigh. Either way, I will keep an eye out for your series too! :grinning:

Hi WinterRobinhood! :grin:
Thanks for your interest! I am still learning, so I am always open for feedback! Took me awhile to read through your series! I hope I can write as well as you do one of these days! :smile: Do keep up the great work!

Thank you so much! I think you have a ton of potential with your writing! And you know what they say, the more you write, the better you get. I can't wait to read more from you. :slight_smile: