Requesting review for chapter 1!

[hjfsdh2222]

After being on Tapastic since June, Chapter 1 of Crime & Cars is finally complete!!

If you would please take the time to give a review or even just a little feedback, that would really help me out. It isn’t very long and it reads rather smoothly. And if you would like to review this on your blog or youtube channel, you have my complete permission to do so!

I won’t go into a summary of the story because I don’t want to kill the mood. But just take a little peak at a couple episodes; I feel confident you will find something interesting about this comic

I’ll let the link do the talking

Crime & Cars | Tapas

Thank you in advance!

[hjfsdh2222]

this is a bump

[lartianmartian1]

I like this comic! I like the Tezuka-influenced style, I enjoy the setting, and Rudy the character's a lovable scamp. I look forward to getting to know him and especially Miss Griffiths more (just because we know so little about her as of right now).

My one complaint is the fact that we don't learn Rudy's name until we get to the title of Episode 2 - Part 3. And even then it's not said aloud by another character until Episode 3 - Part 3. And Miss Griffiths we don't learn the name of until the start of Episode 3?! Unless I'm missing something, I read over the whole thing twice but I do miss stuff Anyway, that only bothers me because these are are two leads.

But that is all, keep on comicking!!!!

[hjfsdh2222]

Ah thank you very much!!

Yes I noticed that too but only post-production:/
I’m going to change the tags so they have the names in there:3 maybe that’ll help