Thanks so much for the review!
Your comic had me hooked from the start, what with the vines and the talking dog and all that, so good job!
I really like the highlights and shading, they feel very natural and I can tell you put a lot of effort into making everything seem realistic while also maintaining the stylistic choices you made. Honestly, I don’t have much to say critique wise about the art. You have a grasp on all the fundamentals, and I don’t really feel qualified to give you advice on how you can make it better
For the story, the beginning was a little confusing. The jumping in between the scenes with Tim and Oden and the joggers was done well, don’t get me wrong. In fact, once I got further into it it made a little more sense, but while the dryad attack and the rescue of the joggers was actually happening, I had to go back and reread it a few times because it felt like I hadn’t quite picked up all the pieces of the story. But that’s a minor thing, and overall doesn’t really impact my comprehension of what’s going on.
Sometimes the pages can get a little text-heavy. I understand that dialogue is important for this story, but when the pages become so cluttered with text that it feels like I’m looking more at letters than drawings, it kind of takes me out of the story. I would work on finding ways to cut out some of the fluff in the dialogue, and leave only what’s absolutely necessary.
Honestly, that’s all I have to say. Like I said, I feel kind of under qualified to be giving you a critique, but hey, I said I would review people’s comics so that’s what I’m gonna do
I hope this helps in some way, and I can’t wait to see more of Legio Arcana!