@beta1042 Here is my full review, I'll be touching on thing I said in my first overview
-Art-
I still say your gradual improvement is amazing. You started with shaky lines, pre-made backgrounds that clash a bit and lack of shadows. Now your line are so clean and good proportion in thickness depending on the distance and better use of colors (better saturation and variety). You are tackling backgrounds yourself and they are coming out nicely, yet I still find the character somethings feel like they float in the background. I think use of 'darker' shade close to there feet might help in that aspect to connect them a bit more to the backgrounds (Expecially floor spaces).
Also speaking of shadows, I re-read a few chapters (start, middle and end) and notice there isn't much change in how the shadows are cast across. I think changing them up a bit, expecially if is a face to face conversation where the light is cast to face of someone while to the other the light is cast from behind. It hasn't affect the story or anything, but for future it might help (Especially in the chapter were Ben is kind of trying to get with Gwen in a way she is not liking it, it might had work a bit more to show it was an uncomftable situation).
Otherwise your improvement is quite noticible and welcome! I really like your style
-Writting-
Another big improvement, on the first a lot of text was used (which is of course understandable since is setting up episode), but now the text are all concrete and easy to follow and gives all the information we need as the rest we can tell by the characters expression or setting.
Really like the different bubble colors per character, it makes it easy to know who said what, specially in parts where that are multiple characters around. I also like that you kept it simply on the font and use two at most, the normal talk one and a cursive like one for 'special' text or effects. Works really well.
-Story-
I am really, really glad this isn't the usual 'After 100 episode...they finally hold hands...100 episode more and they finally confess...50 episode more and an answer is receive!'. I like the fact they become a couple early but still have struggles and of course the people around that this affect. Is good to have a story which is about the relationship and not on 'how they became a couple'.
I like you make sure to devotee an episode to a character when they are introduce or re-appear after awhile to get us interested on them. I remember you once ask me that you were afraid if it was to predictable on who ends with who and I still stand by that in a romance story that isn't the important part, but the how and when and what. We want to know how they end up together and the struggles they face to get there and of course the struggles they face as a couple.
You are doing a fine job there, introducing the one that might want to break them up and someone that will try to get to know Gwen more and of course the internal turmoil of Manson.
-Characters-
Chase is hand down a great character, the sparkle idea gives it a nice touch of comedy that works amazing. His curiosity for most thing we take as normal or natural is quite interesting too.
Mason as the best friend with a bit of complex that girls use him to get to chase is nice. We know this hurts him a lot and make him a bit weary of girls approaching him, but he still a good friend to Mason.
Gwen and Fi are great two, they fit like a glove in Fi being the more rebel risky one and Gwen the more calm passive but with her own touch of passion and courage. The other cast have appear less, but Ben role is establish perfectly and he does such a good job at it xP Valerie is also good and an interesting rival with a bit of mystery on why she hates Gwen so much.
-Overall-
I love that you kept improving as you continue your story as it shows the care and interest you have in telling it. Great cast of characters and a nice romance story I'll keep reading it for a long time!