Review swapping

@Eliphium Eliphium
Sat, 15 Apr 2023 16:31:56 +0000

@Eliphium wrote:

I subbed and left a comment.

I think overall, you have a very detailed story and take command of the first-person perspective very well. I didn't catch that we were reading from a vision/foreshadowing moment. I felt like the details surrounding the MC were a little ambiguous to build tension and power dynamic against the others. However, I like how they express the world through their eyes and thoughts. Each detail you offer creates an immersive experience for the reader that is nicely done.

I wouldn't mind a review if you have time, for my comic.

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