Review swapping

@quintellit Quintellit
Tue, 18 Apr 2023 18:19:35 +0000

@quintellit wrote:

Very interesting premise. Not sure if the main character name is Connor or Tomas. There is a little suspense built that I liked, but some of the words are not used in the right tense. The plot is also interesting but needs more clarity for readers. However, the characters are good.