Review swapping

@CoolRacoon
Sat, 15 Apr 2023 22:11:28 +0000

@CoolRacoon wrote:

I think that sometimes you add information in the text and it feels really forced and instead you should try and imply it somehow.

Apart from that I like the unique premise of the story and how they can soul swap and how the beggar was secretly really powerful and I can see the character development going really far with them two developing to be a duo and caring for each other.

I'm subscribe and finish what's left of what's released later, I just got my own stuff to do rn